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I sit here in dark silence by =obsidiantears83:iconobsidiantears83:



I sit here in silence,
While others scream their thoughts at me
Expecting response,
Not my marionette replies.
I am never alone, but always alone
How can that be?
How can love surrounded me
Yet I still sit here alone?

God I hate this silence
This shattered existence of clotted dreams
Of ragged thoughts and half-dreamt joys
The soundless sighs and noiseless screams
The haunted corridors of Self.

I sit here in silence
Choking on my thoughts
Pretending they aren’t broken
Encrusted welts scab over
Appear healed
Yet I can still feel the blood
Congealing
Weeping crimson..


Don’t judge a book by its cover
But how do we judge ourselves?
Do we try to see what others see
Or what we perceive from inside looking out?

Confidence... self-contained... rational...
Or
Broken... disfigured.. emotional screams?

Will I ever be the papua?
Cocooned in silken garb
Internal miracles taking place
Preparing to be transformed?

Will I feel connected to my loving friends?
Not to feel alone despite their love?
I can only pray…

~15/11/2006 JBC
©2006-2009 =obsidiantears83
:iconobsidiantears83:

Author's Comments

just one of my poems - nothing special.. and its recent and needs reworking.. i write freeverse - no traditional metre or rythm, nor rhymes LOL its alays been metaphor and simile that have been more integral for me.. have to stress i write just for myself, and this isnt really all that great LOL

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:iconwhite13:
thats is a nice!!!

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died and rose again in the name of eternal love.
:iconobsidiantears83:
Thankyou! and thankyou for adding it to your favourites! :blowkiss:

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:iconvyperart:
I like the thoughts expressed in this.

Very well written.

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December 4, 2006
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